Tips
for proofreading
and catching major errors:
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Review
the major error handout to make sure you understand the most significant
problems you're looking for. Also, take a look at the editing section on
pp59-64 in Bedford.
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Read the essay out
loud with a pencil in your hand and mark awkward sections.
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Read the draft
backwards at both the word level (to catch spelling errors) and the sentence
level (to catch grammatical errors).
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Read the draft
through several times with at least an hour in between readings.
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If you’re using a
word processor, make sure to proofread with a hard copy—you won’t be
hypnotized by the flashing pixels this way.
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If you’re using a
word processor, use the spell-checker, but remember that it won’t catch
misspellings like from/form, two/too/to, then/than, of/have.
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Lightly mark
sentences that you’re unsure of, and ask me about them in class next time.
Students
who don't pass this essay generally haven’t spent enough time proofreading
See
Portfolio/Format Guidelines on the
main assignments page for guidance on what to include in your portfolio
and how to format your essay. Several of you are continuing to lose
points because you do not include writing goals, self-evaluation, and/or
unit evaluation. Remember to include a complete annotated
bibliography with your pre-writing/invention; recall this is different
than the works cited which will be the last page of your essay and should
only include the works you actually cite in the essay (without
annotations). I also encourage you to review the model research paper in
section 58B of The Bedford Handbook to see what the essay should look
like. COMMON
PROBLEMS: The most common problem with this essay is that
students don't always maintain their own voices and instead just put together a
series of points that they have taken from other essays. YOU SHOULD DRIVE
THE ARGUMENT AND USE THE SECONDARY SOURCES AS A CHORUS TO BACK UP YOUR OWN
VIEWS. Also, remember that it is a good idea to use people who disagree
with you to set up counterarguments--you have real opposition here that you can
refute instead of imaginary opposition as in the "Babylon Revisited" paper.
The other problem that comes up is that students don't correctly document their
sources--as I've mentioned several times, see chapter 55 in Bedford for
help on this issue. Another problem that sometimes comes up is faulty
tone--make sure to consider your audience and don't use language that alienates
them or puts them on the defensive.
FATAL FLAWS: If you have a fatal flaw in
your paper, you will automatically fail the assignment. The fatal flaws
are: A) neglecting to include a works cited page, and B) neglecting to include
sufficient evidence from the research packet.
I strongly encourage you to use my office hours, the
writing
center, and The Bedford Handbook to help you
solve the problems as you revise your essay. |